More Feedback from the Story for “Think About the Bubbles” #3 (My Anxiety is My Lover)

"This is looking good. You have developed the power to make your writings very honest and bare bones, thus making it relatable. I like where this is going, I hope you are not finished with the piece because it’s good but you can make it great, a classic even. Tighten it up in a few places and BOOM!! You got some Nikki Giovanni type catharsis going on here. "

I’m meeting with John (my friend the illustrator) tomorrow. I’M SO EXCITED.

  1. airhornoftruthandlove posted this